I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia ora my name is Patrick I like how you made a Mood and Atmosphere the mood part looks super cool because you are taking about whats is mood that is cool well hope you have a good weekend Bye
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
kia ora my name is Patrick I like how you made a Mood and Atmosphere the mood part looks super cool because you are taking about whats is mood that is cool well hope you have a good weekend Bye
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