I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Aryan, This is a cool story and I can tell you enjoyed the work, maybe next time add a explanation. Remember to keep up the great work. Bye from Giorgio
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteWell done for having a go at writing your recount in paragraphs. Keep sharing your learning on your blog.
Thank you Manpreet
DeleteWOW Hi my name is Patrick I Like how you are talking about your lock down it looks cool well have a good day.
ReplyDeleteThank you Patrick
DeleteHi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteits me Jimmy and I like how you work on your lock down work its amazing Keep on posting your great work on your blog.
Thank you Jimmy
DeleteI like your lockdown stories
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DeleteHi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool story and I can tell you enjoyed the work, maybe next time add a explanation. Remember to keep up the great work.
Bye from Giorgio
Thank you Giorgio
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