I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
We are learning to analyse texts and look at how authors create mood and atmosphere by using language features. Here is a screencast I created with Fraise of our analysis of the text North Korea Unveil huge Missile.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi my name is Patrick I like how you made you text analysis it looks super cool i love you how you work hope you have good day bye
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