I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Aryan I'm Harriet. Your creative writing was really good. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and at some points I got a bit confused on what was happening. All together great story.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi im from otkai college and I love this story. i also like to write horror stories. hope to see more stories soon
ReplyDeleteHi Aryan I'm Harriet. Your creative writing was really good. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and at some points I got a bit confused on what was happening. All together great story.
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