I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Aryan, Great start with your letter. Please complete it by tomorrow and add some questions to ask your pen pal. You could ask what movies they like or what food they like, how many people in their family? Keep sharing your learning on your blog.
Hi Aryan, I am lie from RM2 I am very proud of you because I like how you edit your pen pal and this is really good. It improves learning and entertainment. Have a good weekend!
Hi Aryan, I'd like to say that your letter was fantastic but maybe you should write a little more but your letter was excellent. I hope your Pen Pal replies back to you guys. -Good Job -Ema From EHS Room Eleven
Hi I'm Drew, and I'm from Otaki College in Otaki. I'm 12 years old and I also like Minecraft, Fortnite and Roblox. What's your favourite roblox game? Mines jailbreak, I've gotten the 1 million vehicle and its fun.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteGreat start with your letter. Please complete it by tomorrow and add some questions to ask your pen pal. You could ask what movies they like or what food they like, how many people in their family? Keep sharing your learning on your blog.
Thank you Manpreet
DeleteHi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great Pen Pal letter you wrote I liked it.Stay safe,
Luisapeta.
Thank you Luisapeta
DeleteHi Aryan, I am lie from RM2 I am very proud of you because I like how you edit your pen pal and this is really good. It improves learning and entertainment. Have a good weekend!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lie
DeleteHi Aryan,
ReplyDeleteI'd like to say that your letter was fantastic but maybe you should write a little more but your letter was excellent. I hope your Pen Pal replies back to you guys.
-Good Job
-Ema From EHS Room Eleven
Thank you Ema
DeleteHi I'm Drew, and I'm from Otaki College in Otaki. I'm 12 years old and I also like Minecraft, Fortnite and Roblox. What's your favourite roblox game? Mines jailbreak, I've gotten the 1 million vehicle and its fun.
ReplyDeleteThank you Drew
DeleteHi my name is Patrick I like how you are talking about yourself and how you are telling us what you have learnt over your history
ReplyDeleteThank you Patrick
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ReplyDeletehi my name is Patrick I like how you are give us information about yourself it Looks cool well have a good day
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