I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Aryan, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. It is good that you have included a picture of yourself and your favourite hobby. Maybe you could also find pictures to show some of the other things about you, like what you love and your goals for the future.
Kia ora our names are Kireesha and Harley and we like that you have shared this info with us. And for telling us your hobbies and what you would like to be in the future. (I like Fortnite too) and maybe next time you could give us more info about yourself please.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Aryan, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. It is good that you have included a picture of yourself and your favourite hobby. Maybe you could also find pictures to show some of the other things about you, like what you love and your goals for the future.
ReplyDeleteKia ora our names are Kireesha and Harley and we like that you have shared this info with us. And for telling us your hobbies and what you would like to be in the future. (I like Fortnite too) and maybe next time you could give us more info about yourself please.
ReplyDeleteHi Kireesha and Harley we should play fortnite together my name is StewyLeaf505068
DeleteKia ora Aryan.Our name Is Sione and Patrick from EHS. We really like how your photo and I like to be a gamer.Ka kite.Have a good weekend.
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