I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai kōrua, good work on your story book! I was amused that you had Aryan retire at the end (poor thing). Something that could make your book even better would be to put each paragraph on a separate page and add pictures as well!
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Ka pai kōrua, good work on your story book! I was amused that you had Aryan retire at the end (poor thing). Something that could make your book even better would be to put each paragraph on a separate page and add pictures as well!
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