I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like your report about beaches, Aryan. I think you read your script well and you spoke very clearly so your audience could hear you. When you said "beaches come in all different colours including white, grey etc.", did you mean the sand comes in all different colours? What you say your definition of beach is? You have shared some really practical ideas about beaches in particular, but perhaps next time you might want to extend your research towards the animal life or pollution on the beaches.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
I like your report about beaches, Aryan. I think you read your script well and you spoke very clearly so your audience could hear you. When you said "beaches come in all different colours including white, grey etc.", did you mean the sand comes in all different colours? What you say your definition of beach is? You have shared some really practical ideas about beaches in particular, but perhaps next time you might want to extend your research towards the animal life or pollution on the beaches.
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