I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo leiei Aryan This is Sione from Rm2 I like the way that you explain your work, Thank you for sharing your amazing work, Add more colours into your presentation, Why did you share us your work?
hi my name is Patrick i like how you said that you like endgame thats is the best movies in the world because i love that movie it is cool hope you have a good day
Hi my name is Patrick from Edmund Hillary school I like how you told us what your Favorited movie is i watch that at the movies it was so fun well have a good day
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I like the way that you explain your work,
Thank you for sharing your amazing work,
Add more colours into your presentation,
Why did you share us your work?
hi my name is Patrick i like how you said that you like endgame thats is the best movies in the world because i love that movie it is cool hope you have a good day
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Patrick from Edmund Hillary school I like how you told us what your Favorited movie is i watch that at the movies it was so fun well have a good day
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