I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 4 December 2020
Tuesday, 1 December 2020
Monday, 23 November 2020
Text analysis
We are learning to analyse texts and look at how authors create mood and atmosphere by using language features. Here is a screencast I created with Fraise of our analysis of the text North Korea Unveil huge Missile.
My Zoo Recount
It was a cloudy Wednesday I was coming to school and I did not want to go to the zoo so that's why I did not come tuesday and then I told my mom why is there so much bus is here and then my mom told me they might be going to the zoo I got out of the car I got to my class and I saw Sheona organising my class we walked out of the class we finally got onto the bus the bus started and we went on our adventure.
I told my friend to sit beside me. His name is Fraise and he is one of my best friends. I got to sit on the window seat so I was happy I saw a lot of things like cars. We finally arrived.
I got out of the bus and I saw another school and I was like what are they doing here??? and then Fraise told me they are coming to the zoo as well. We saw a lot of cool animals like Capybara, Lion, Kea, Zebra, Spider Monkey Eel Rainbow fish Emu Lizards Cheetah and a Rhino that was very very muddy the good reason that I wanted to come to the zoo because the park that the zoo had one small side and one big slide I ran to the big with side with Fraise I went first and then Fraise went then Fraise hit me on the back because I didn't get out that fast enough we only had 30 minutes to stay at the zoo 30 minutes over we went to the bus I was feeling a little hungry so I eat something and that something was chips we finally got to our school it was 5 mins before we go back home when the bell rang I went running out the door The End
Monday, 16 November 2020
Friday, 6 November 2020
My creative writing
Hello bloggers this is Aryan in my class I am learning about mood and atmosphere with my buddy Ila