I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Aryan this is Neha. Your speech is wonderfully written and well said. Keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteHi Aryan,what a nice speech you've done, but what do you think is hero ordinary people?
ReplyDeletekia Ora Aryan
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very nice and clear and I really like your background and your photo its very nice. Maia