I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Aryan, thank you for sharing your bird survey observations. I like how you have added pictures of the types of birds you've seen. To improve your post it would be great for you to write about the reason why you did the survey.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Aryan, thank you for sharing your bird survey observations. I like how you have added pictures of the types of birds you've seen. To improve your post it would be great for you to write about the reason why you did the survey.
ReplyDelete